TWDarkflame's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[USS Enterprise Two]

great

Excelent work, the whole detail and all the secrets are great. (especial #1 :p)
Really nice style too, i love the "freeform" do anything kinda play.

You should expand that.
Purhapes you could do some automatic record of numbers or an inventory system for the next one.

JeremyLokken responds:

I expanded into making it freeform style. I liked that, especially with the officer's quarters. I was thinking about an inventory system when making this one, but it got too complex for my little programming brain to handle :)

[The Random Word Generator]

neat

actualy thats pretty neat, as it produced "real-ish" words.
Did you code to force vowels in certain positions? (else you would get stuff like ZXCK,DTTY ect)

Retox responds:

Yes, I created a bunch of different possiblity sets. A represents a random vowel and B represents and random consanant. They I would order it like : ABBA or BABA or BAABA etc. otherwise yes you'd be reading stuff like TRRTR or PTQXZ. Also, no matter what, a U follows every Q. You can imagine how long it took for an idiot like me to program all this using AS.

[The Big Red Button]

heehe

Fun, i completed it in 2 clicks.
One of them was a left click.

[Squirrel Squash 2]

freaky and fun

hehe,quite nice little manic game.
A high-score table would be nice...or at least showing your score at the gameover screen.

Also, you should put this in Franks Adventure.
Mini-games really improve that game.

[Make your own Bug!]

nifty.

dunno what the hell it was, but it was pretty well made.

Purhapes an overlay and underlay would add too it.
(ie, underlay for a backdrop you can pick, and an overlay for weather effects)

As with any customising thing though, you can keep pilling more options forever.

[Random Bush Accuser]

great.

Im no fan of Bush, but quite a lot of this stuff is MORE realistic then the storys some people spew about him.
Very funny, and it really clearly takes the piss out the over-the-top conspicy thoeriests.

[ultimate flash sonic]

wow

excelent work.
Seems to be based off the Sonic Advanced games, which is no bad thing at all.
(imo,way better then all the recent 3D ones)

You really captured the spirit of the games well.

[Abner Toss]

simple but fun

Pretty good, would be much better if the camera tracked him as he is chucked.
(so you see him flying past cloads, then the atmosphere then space).

TheBoob responds:

i was thinking about doing that, but couldn't quite figure out what the best way to do it was, but since you (and someone else) think its a good idea i might rack my brain for a good idea, thanx

[Ridex Classic Racer]

hmmm

Overly simplistic, but fairly well made.

[You Got Saddam]

hehe

I thought this would be crap, but you put a lot of effort into it.
Lots of different things to do, and different things happen when you do them more then once.
VERY good!

And yes, i especialy hope one day the friends and family of those 300,000 in the unmarked mass grave get to do stuff like this.
In fact, I hope they can artificialy keep him alive for the purpose....