TWDarkflame's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The New Guy]

Brillent

Wonderfull, great expressions and nicely cut together.

[Craziness3D]

umm

nice idea...but you didnt try to do a 3D animation, you just had static pictures :(
Why not try to expirement to make a simple 3D animation?

Just get colours tuned to the glass's, and vary the distance between the red and green lines to ary the distance in and out of the screen.

I would surgest using the interlaced/shutter glass's techique, but that would probably cause non-shutter glass owners to go into a fit :p

[DS vs. PSP]

so the SP one out of the DS and PSP?

This did kinda suck :-/

But to be fair, your not a totaly useless animator..I can see you went to effort in parts of it, then got bored, then tried a bit again.

A few tips:
*Dont use photobackgrounds...looks out of place with cartoony stuff. (if you must use photos, use Flash's convert tool to make it vector, by playing with the settings you can make photos look a bit cartoony)

*When people walk, have the background scroll

*When you get bored, stop animating, and come back to it later.

As far as your ideas go, its fine; Too big reboots fighting as handhelds. (ironic really).

You just need to be a bit more specific with ideas.
Think:
What would a DS rebots strengths be?
Would it go around pooking the PSP with a stylus and then try to snap its head of with its hinge?

What would the PSP's strengths be?
Would it have blinding backlights and try to blind the DS ?
Or what it use its l33t graphics to confuse it.
Or maybe it shoots UMD discs :D

Theres plenty of ideas if you just made the robots more like the consoles.

The-Mobile-sponge responds:

Thanks for the help, unlike alot of these biased reviews, it's good to see a few actually give me some constructive critisism.

[Pretty Much OcarinaOfTime]

Nice

Nice concept and resonable well done but...

If your going for the "crudely done is funny" type thinking, you should purhapes try to be consistant.

Also, excess! Have more stuff happening faster, go into more detail but do it faster. Speed up your voice if you have too, or even use a computer voice. (would fit quite well actualy, imo)

The voice over just felt a bit slow, imo.
Too much pause's and gaps.

[Star Wars Transitions]

*waves hand in jedi like way*

You shall not take the piss out of the transitions...
You shall think transitions are good..

Actualy, Eppisode 3 didnt seem quite as bad as the others in terms of quanity of them. I like them, they are a fairly simple film makeing "signature",

[Truth: NG & Pokémon]

Great but you left one thing out

That Alien Hominod looks like a pokemon!
Add a Pikachu Cross fade..clearly related!

RazorHawk responds:

Bright yellow color, shiny black eyes, hey, you got a point there!

[Random Acts]

Great work,

Great work :D

You should send a copy (or link) to these guys:
(www) join-me (co.uk)

This is actualy a large cult ("Collective" they call it, but its a cult), that sets out to do random acts of kindness to complete strangers every friday.
Danny Wallace founded it and theres a funny book about how it was formed.

Send this to them and they would get a huge kick out of it.

BADMAN responds:

That's funny. I might.

[If...]

sickly beutifull

...yet perfectly expressive.